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Sentence starters for persuasive writing

Every Kid should learn how to swim?

I believe that every kid should learn how to swim(agreeing).

My first reason is as they grow up having kids and one day they will be having a joyful swim around but suddenly their kid got too far to the sea and started to drown and what do you do? (thinking)what?.

Not knowing what to do because you can’t swim the reason why you never had learned a lesson how to swim, what would happen to you child?!.

To start with, most people will agree that kids should learn to swim while there young.

In my opinion kids should have the chance to swim and they should learn how to swim in a deep pool.

If the kid learn how to swim in a baby pool they will pretend to swim but the thing is that they were actually touching the ground.

I’m absolutely certain that every child in NZ should learn to swim. It is important to acknowledge that paying for swimming lessons can be very expensive, especially if there are more than 1 kid in each family. In light of this, the NZ school system requires students to learn to swim and this is usually free.

It would be worthwhile if every kid should join a swimming lesson so they can learn how to swim

Vaiola,Hiria.Ana,Maria




Kids should get free time at school everyday?

I disagree that kids should get freetime every day. My first reason is  if they have free time everyday because the kids get bored and have nothing else to do they just have anything in their little brains with something smart just video games and to much eye looking at the netbook playing just games.

In my opinion they should be only playing games and having free time because when they get to collage they will do anything is act dumb because of nothing that they had learn all they had learn is how to play a game that through these year no learner that means they have to start the whole year again of not knowing what to or just staying in one class for a bit.

But on the other hand people or kids will agree just because they are sick of learning they all just want to is play games and parents well some won’t even care just mind what they are doing.

Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Tuesday, September 25, 2018

Blindfold Challenge

INTRO -
WHAT: Blindfold challenge.
WHERE: room 7
WHY: For fun
WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am
HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture
WHO: Room 7 students

PARAGRAPH 1:
  • Get in buddies
  • Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
  • In your head, made a plan of which way to go
  • Say who your buddy was.
PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED
  • Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
  • How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
  • Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
  • Banged into each other.
  • Table pushed me to the side
  • Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
  • Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
  • Kaboom
  • “ahhh”
PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO
  • Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
  • Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
  • Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,
CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)
  • My favourite was..\\
  • I felt ..
  • It was easy/hard because..
  • I would or wouldn’t do this again because...





INTRO:
“ YIPPEEEE’’  I said. It was Friday 21st of september at 9.10am  Room 7 students got into buddies and Miss Ashley arranged the furniture and told us to get into buddies.

PARAGRAPH #1
Me and Ana got into buddies  and Miss Ashley gave us instructions and rules - points. She told us “ In your head make a plan of where to go like left or right and make sure that you do not stand on the paper and touch the tables only touch the chairs and climb over it” carefully.

PARAGRAPH #2
The first person to be blindfold was Ana. Ana said that she felt so scared that someone might bump into her and scare her. When we in buddies Miss Ashley said that “ The back person has to blindfold the person in the front that is your buddy she ask me if we could swap so I can be blindfold and she will do the talking. Miss heard us and said “ NO ’’ you are not aloud to swap. Then we went buddy by buddy.

PARAGRAPH #3
Then when Miss was finish with the rules and all that Miss told Me and ana to go and Hiria and vaiola but Hiria and vaiola where is buddies. Then we got up and then started walking then I told Ana to go left then right and then straight. Out class had a goal to try and and touch the purple cardboard then Miss took a photo of me and Ana touch the cardboard. And when we try to go over the chair we had to Grab lean and climb over and step over.

CONCLUSION
I  would or wouldn't do this again because it is so hard because you have to try not touch the papers and stuff and I felt very nervous that I had to do it well some people are watching me. Ana got mixed up with our left and our right because when it was my turn Ana says left and right and I go that way but she tells me to follow her voice but it was too hard to follow.                                     

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WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED:
Author:

Checked by:

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Surface features
Searched
Found
Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence



Capital ‘I’



Capital letters for names of places and people



Full stops at the end of a sentence



Speech marks when people are talking



Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘



Words are written in past tense



Connectives - next, then, afterwards



Interesting and difficult adjectives



Deep features



Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how



Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt



Ideas/events in the right order



3 paragraphs



Metaphors and similes



Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom



Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex





One thing that (name) did well was…

One thing that (name) needs to work on:











Monday, September 24, 2018

Editing a Story?

Here is our edited story.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game. 

Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“  However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina.  We had to line up by the heater in our buddies. 

First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy)  put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.

Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!

I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.