Nice job on completing this task that you have given.I really enjoyed the facts about tripoli because how I got to learn something from it like how the Germans tried to take the city Tripoli.Well done but maybe next time you could work on putting some details on like: -What you enjoyed? -What you found chanllenging? -What you learnt? and other stuff like that for your reader so they can know more information about this task that you had been given by great job and well done.
Hi Maria,
ReplyDeleteNice job on completing this task that you have given.I really enjoyed the facts about tripoli because how I got to learn something from it like how the Germans tried to take the city Tripoli.Well done but maybe next time you could work on putting some details on like:
-What you enjoyed?
-What you found chanllenging?
-What you learnt?
and other stuff like that for your reader so they can know more information about this task that you had been given by great job and well done.
-Aletheia!